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A Nice Place to Visit

The Bolivar’s museum is a place very important for the Ambato city, because have many

interesting things that to show for the general public. The historical information about

Ecuador and especially of Ambato have a significant past for our grandparents. There

was big personages that contributed to have better days. The old places demonstrate

[wonderful landscapes without many buildings and that had a great nature, but most of

those people were poor]. All people celebrate together diverse customs, like:[ the king

sun’s adoration, harvest of corn’s dance, bull’s runs, etc.]. In addition to this, they always

share all, therefore they had good human’s relations. The animals that exhibited in this

important museum, were examples dissected but they looked like each other very real,

I surprised of personal manner. [There was birds very colorful, most of those was big like

the condor or ostrich and others more small as the parrot and the hummingbird]. The

most incredible and [big animal was the elephant], consequently everybody [took

pictures of this animal]. Also there was [dangerous animals, like for example: the snake,

guatuza or crocodile] that according to our guide, he said that those animals sometimes

can to be [very friendlies but other times can to be so dangerous], even can to eat to the

people, is [depend of the animal behavior], the guide expressed. All those animals

mentioned were brought of different regions of the Ecuador, but the elephant had been

brought of the Asian continent.