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4.  Organizing:
                         I  learned  a  little  the  English  language  because  for  the  classes  I'm
                         following I'm complicated as speaking and writing in English.


                      5.  Write my first draft.



                                                 I learned a little English



                         I learned a little English, like speaking and writing in English because

                         it made me very difficult to understand in class. Then, I learned to
                         [speak in English], listening to diverse types of music or downloading
                         on my cell phone.  Watching movies on the computer subtitled in
                         English so I can understand what they are talking about, when I am

                         doing homework. finally, I could [write in English], reading a book
                         every  day.  Since  with  that  being  able  to  be  in  contact  with  the
                         language also with that I could learn new vocabularies and write at

                         least  one  conversation.  Learning  English  can  help  me  to  pass  the
                         semester  and  to  travel  to  the  countries  that  speak  the  English
                         language.



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