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Despising other people does not make you more intelligent or more important, it makes you more
         Counterclaim
                            miserable and less human.







                 Refuting Evidence                     Refuting Evidence                     Refuting Evidence
     “The  teacher  thought  I  was  stupid.  “"Sit  down,  Richard."  And  I  always  “And  then  I  started  to  sneak  through
     Couldn't spell, couldn't read, couldn't do  thought  the  teacher  kind  of  liked  me.  alleys, to take the long way home so the
     arithmetic.  Just  stupid.  Teachers  were  She  always  picked  me  to  wash  the  people  going  into  White's  Eat  Shop
     never  interested  in  finding  out  that  you  blackboard on Friday, after school. That  wouldn't see me. Yeah, the whole world
     couldn't concentrate because you were so  was  a  big  thrill;  it  made  me  feel  heard the teacher that day-we all know
     hungry,  because  you  hadn't  had  any  important.  If  I  didn't  wash  it,  come  you don't have a Daddy.”
     breakfast.”                            Monday the school might not function
                                            right.”
















     Commentary                             Commentary                           Commentary

     People should show more interest to other  I did not like this part because I think  The boy maybe taught he was inferior to
     people. For example, the teacher always  that the teacher always did bad things to  others because his teacher made him to
     denigrated her student and always made  him, and it was a way of humiliating him  believe it. He had low self-steem because
     him feel like an idiot, but it was because  and  showing  that  he  was  inferior  to  of  his  teacher’s  mistreat.  He  deserved
     she never talked with him and she never  others.                            someone  who  were  his  friend,  but  he
     realized about his problems. So, it made                                    could  not  find  it  because  the  most
     her less human because she could help her                                   important  person  in  his  class  (the
     student.                                                                    teacher) made him feel useless.
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