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STEP 4.
Write the draft
THE POLLUTION IN THE WORLD
Everybody should unite us to help to the nature. First, the world in general is

having bad and dangerous changes. (If people didn’t throw trash in the public

spaces; we wouldn’t a lot of contamination). Second, if at least a 95% use the

bicycles, will there are less pollution. (However many people use an

individual car). (In most of the factories around the world, people use big

machines in bad conditions). (They should change those machines for other

machines with renewable energy). Third, the excessive use of harmful

products cause problems to the environment, like for example: many animals

are death and there isn’t healthy food; besides the majority of people eat fast

food. (The chemicals cause serious consequences to the atmosphere).

In fact, we should change certain bad actions to contribute and improve the

home that is our planet.

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