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4.- First Draft:
Watching Movies
Watching movies is the best pastime for three reasons. It’s interesting because I
can learn about different topics. Watching foreign movies, I have learned about
different cultures and lifestyles from other countries. It’s a good way to learn about
history. Watching movies amuse me when I’m boring. The movies that have a lot of
special effects are amazing. Comedy movies are hilarious because the actors make
good jokes. I think that movies are a good topic to discuss. After my family and I
watched a movie, we liked to discuss with our opinions about it. Then, I would like to
write my conclusion on my personal blog to share it with many people around the
world. That’s why for me watching movies is the best pastime.
5.- Final Draft:
Watching Movies
Watching movies is the best pastime for three reasons. First, it’s interesting
because I can learn about different topics. Watching foreign movies, I have learned
about different cultures and lifestyles from other countries. Also, it’s a good way to
learn about history. Second, watching movies amuse me when I’m boring. For
example, the movies that have a lot of special effects are amazing. On the other hand,
comedy movies are hilarious because the actors make good jokes. Finally, I think that
movies are a good topic to discuss. After my family and I watched a movie, we liked
to discuss with our opinions about it. Then, I would like to write my conclusion on my
personal blog to share it with many people around the world. That’s why for me
watching movies is the best pastime.
