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Step 1

                  I graduated, I learned to play the guitar, and I won the first place in the music festival.

                  Step 2

                      -  Finished the high school
                      -  Learn play the guitar
                      -  Win the music festival
                      -  Study in the University

                  Step 3

                  3.1. - Finished the high school: write the project investigation, pass the different quizzes.

                  3.2. - Learn play the guitar: buy the guitar, find the guitar class
                  3.3. - Win the music festival: join a band, rehearse a lot with my friends.

                  3.4. - Study in the University: pass the quiz ENES.

                  Step 4

                                               My different accomplishments

                  I have some memories of my life such as: I finished the high school, I learned play the guitar,
                  I won the first place in the music festival, and I started study in the University. First, before
                  of concluded the high school. I wrote the project investigation with my classmate, we chose
                  a topic very difficult, because no one chose a similar topic, also for pass the different quizzes.
                  I studied a lot, especially in the Mathematic. Next, I learned play the guitar, but I needed a
                  guitar, I bought an electric guitar in the store the brand of instruments was Jackson, but I
                  didn’t know, I found the guitar class in Ambato. After, I won the music festival in the year
                  2010, It was amazing, in the same year I joined a band, and this band was called Domino,
                  and rehearsed a lot for won this price. Finally, when I decided study in the University, I
                  prepared  a  lot  in  different  subjects  for  passed  the  ENES  quiz.  I  enjoyed  all  my
                  accomplishments, and in the future I will a lot most goals.



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