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Wait for the position of the sun Composition
more behind the clouds.
One simple suggestion will be to have the people
a bit more inside the frame.
Exposure
Please see the box around the sun. Ensure
that the area especially around the sun is not
overexposed.

Processing
In black and white processing its imperative
that we bring more grey tones out. If you are
choosing straight desaturation to convert to
black and white, I would rather suggest selective
processing in Adobe Camera RAW HSL tab or
Channel Mixer in Photoshop.
Creativity & Impact
This is supposed to give you a feeling of love
or romance, or simply togetherness. Use
better processing, exposure management and
composition as suggested above. Use dodge and
burn to bring more contrast in clouds too.

These two converging lines add some I enjoyed how you have captured Reviewed By : Lalit Deshmukh
substance in the foreground. Make this beautiful couple with hands
the shadows stronger for the fore- together. I also liked you selected a Camera: Nikon D5200;
ground line traced by the sand. vertical angle where the forms are
sticking above the horizon line. Lens: 10.0-20.0 mm f/3.5
Focal length: 20mm;
Aperture: f/22;
Shutter speed: 1/24sec; ISO: 100

How about a bit more
Bhushan Navare breathing space? Exif-Information Not available
Impact
Fair but nothing too exciting

Composition
Fair. Please check the boxes.
Exposure
Looks good. Brighten the sky a bit.
Processing
Use the light more creatively.
Creativity & Impact
recover some highlights from the
bright walls of the houses.

Reviewed By : Lalit Deshmukh
Too big for the subject in the foreground that is
very much in the shadow. If you waited for light on
the peak region of the hill where monastery sits on,
would have helped. Then the light would separate
from the shadow below and would create apt layers.
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