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                  REVISE AND EDIT                                                             Review your draft.

               The revision and editing steps give you a chance to look carefully at your draft

               and make changes. Work with a partner to determine whether you have
               supported your argument clearly. Use these questions to help you evaluate and

               improve your article.




                      PURPOSE/            ORGANIZATION            EVIDENCE              LANGUAGE/            CONVENTIONS
                        FOCUS                                                          VOCABULARY

                 … …Have I clearly     … …Does my             … …Have I supported   … …Did I use linking   … …Did I indent each
                    stated my             argument have          each of my            words and             new paragraph?
                    argument?             a clear                reasons with          phrases to show
                                          introduction?          facts and details?    how the facts,     … …Have I used verb
                 … …Have I stayed on                                                   reasons, and          tenses correctly?
                    topic?             … …Does each body      … …Are all of the        opinion are
                                          paragraph focus        facts and details I   related?
                                          on one reason          chose clearly
                                          that supports my       related to the
                                          argument?              argument?





                  PUBLISH                                                                     Share your work.


               Create a Finished Copy  Make a final copy of your argument. Consider these
               options to share your writing:

                   1  E-mail your argument to your principal.


                   2  Have a class panel discussion about the importance of local orchestras.
                       Read your argument aloud as part of the discussion.


                   3  Record yourself reading your argument aloud. Post the audio file
                       on your class website or on your family’s social media page.








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