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REVISE AND EDIT Review your draft.

The revision and editing steps give you a chance to look carefully at your writing

and make changes. Work with a partner to determine whether you have explained
your ideas clearly to readers. Use these questions to help you evaluate and improve
your article.

PURPOSE/ ORGANIZATION EVIDENCE LANGUAGE/ CONVENTIONS
FOCUS VOCABULARY
Does my news Will my Did I use text Did I define Have I used the
report explain introduction get evidence to scientific words correct spelling
how inventions a listener’s explain how each in context? for their, there,
affect people’s attention? invention affects and they’re?
lives? people’s lives and
Does my what inspired the Have I made sure
Did I provide conclusion inventors? that words with
information summarize the multiple
about two or importance of meanings are
more inventions? the inventions in used correctly?
people’s lives?

PUBLISH Share your work.

Create a Finished Copy Make a final copy of your news report. You may wish to
include an illustration or a chart. Consider these options to share your news report.

1 Publish your news report on your blog or social media.

2 Present your news report to your class like a television
news reporter.

3 Submit your article to the school newspaper or a local paper.

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