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o I was fast
o I lost
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My First Trophy
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1 I won the first the trophy of my life when I trained the judo sport. I remember that, I
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won the trophy in the National Championship of sport in June. This championship was
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in Guayaquil and, I had 16 years old. I remember that I was very excited, because I was
Winning three fights, and my fourth fight was against a girl from Guayaquil who was
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stronger and taller than me. I was scared, then my mother, my brother and my coach told
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me: “You just do it”, after hearing those words I went to fight. When I was fighting,
I was fast and I worked hard but I lost.
8 When it was time for the awards ceremony I was surprised because, the jury decided to
give me a trophy for the bravest and fastest competitor, in this moment I felt so successful.
9 In short that was my great experience and the prettiest of all.
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