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Explanation: Furthermore, these drinks do nothing to improve the lives of
children and teens.

Link: Wise and caring politicians should work to preserve the health of our

young people and proposed laws restricting access to these harmful beverages
will be an important step in protecting the next generation.

Concluding Paragraph

Restate thesis: When one considers health risks, financial implications, and

legal precedent, it is clear that approving this new law is the right move.

Restate body paragraph 1`s main idea: Energy drinks are bad for teenagers
and it can cause the death.

Restate body paragraph 2`s main idea: Restricting access to these toxic

beverages is simply financial.
Restate body paragraph 3`s main idea: Many people said that the government

have not to intervene in the life of the people and the teenagers can to spend
their money as they want.

Leave the reader with something insightful about your topic: Energy drinks
causes damage in the body for that reason the next time a teen faces a daunting

amount of homework or needs to cram for final exams, the best move should be

to take a short nap, enjoy a brisk walk, or gulp a large glass of water instead of
consuming chemical crud.

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