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    Reason  2               Discrimination  at  school  by  teachers.  Poor  children  who  have  problems  cannot  learn  as
                            children without limitations.

    Supporting Evidence                   Supporting Evidence                  Supporting Evidence

    “The  teacher  thought  I  was  stupid.  “The  teacher  thought  I  was  a  “I  stood  up  and  raised  my  hand.
    Couldn't spell, couldn't read, couldn't  troublemaker. All she saw from the  "What is it now?" "You forgot me?"
    do  arithmetic.  Just  stupid.  Teachers  front of the room was a little black  She turned toward the blackboard. "I
    were  never  interested  in  finding  out  boy who squirmed in his idiot's seat  don't  have  time  to  be  playing  with
    that you couldn't concentrate because  and made noises and poked the kids  you,  Richard."…"And  furthermore,"
    you  were  so  hungry,  because  you  around him. I guess she couldn't see  she  said,  looking  right  at  me,  her
    hadn't  had  any  breakfast.  All  you  a kid who made noises because he  nostrils  getting  big  2  and  her  lips
    could  think  about  was  noontime;  wanted  someone  to  know  he  was  getting  thin  and  her  eyes  opening
    would it ever come?”                   there”.                              wide,  "We  know  you  don't  have  a
                                                                                daddy."

    Commentary                             Commentary                           Commentary

    In  this  part  of  the  text,  the  teacher  Here  you  can  realize  that  Dick  is  Here  you  can  see  how  the  teacher
    thinks that Dick is stupid because he  isolated of the rest of the class. He  mistreat Dick because she thinks that
    doesn’t  learn  as  other  children.  But,  is  hyperactive  and  always  makes  he  is  stupid  and  cannot  think  or  do
    she  doesn’t  realize  that  because  of  noise  just  to  catch  attention.  He  whatever.  She  wants  Dick  to  be
    poverty  Dick  has  a  lot  of  problems  feels alone, and he needs someone  quiet, and for that she decides to tell
    that doesn’t allow him to concentrate  to talk to. This is common in school  him something that really hurts. The
    only  in  his  studies.  That  is  very  and  high  school.  Teachers  don’t  teacher  reminds  him  that  he  doesn’t
    common  in  our  society,  people  are  want  to  investigate  why  certain  have a father. In society, these kinds
    good  for  judge  other.  They  don’t  students  misbehave  in  class.  They  of situations are very common. When
    realize  that  everyone  has  problems  just isolate them to keep the rest of  people  disagree  with  someone  they
    and  some  of  these  problems  can  the       class    below     control.  immediately decided to hurt others in
    affect the performance at school or at  “Troublemakers”  need  help  and  order to feel pride of themselves.
    work.                                  someone  who  listen  to  them  to
                                           realize  what  is  the  problem  they
                                           have.



     Counterclaim            Poor people feel ashamed of depends on the welfare of other people besides that they suffer
                             discrimination because of their situation.

     Refuting Evidence                     Refuting Evidence                    Refuting Evidence

     “There  was  shame  in  going  to  the   “There  was  shame  in  wearing  the  “There was shame in running over to
     Worthy  Boys  Annual  Christmas        brown  and  orange  and  white  plaid  Mister Ben's at the end of the day and
     Dinner  for  you  and  your  kind,     mackinaw' the welfare gave to three  asking  for  his  rotten  peaches,  there
     because  everybody  knew  what  a      thousand  boys.  Why'd  it  has  to  be  was  shame  in  asking  Mrs.  Simmons
     worthy  boy  was.  Why  couldn't  they   the  same  for  everybody  so  when  for  a  spoonful  of  sugar,  there  was
     just  call  it  the  Boys  Annual  Dinner-  you  walked  down  the  street  the  shame  in  running  out  to  meet  the
     why'd they have to give it a name?”    people  could  see  you  were  on  relief truck. I hated that truck, full of
                                            relief?”                             food for you and your kind. I ran into
                                                                                 the house and hid when it came”.
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