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A. People should study
B. Educations is part of life

III. Tuition free means development

A. More people study

B. More professionals for the country

Essay

The most important thing for people is education. After finishing high school,
teenagers want to study at university. So, a college or university education should be tuition

free because many people don’t have money to pay for being taught.

There is a group of poor people who want to study at college. [These people are the
most important reason to demand tuition free at college, because poor people have the same

rights to study that others.] In addition, poor people are usually the best students because of
their dedication and desires to be a professional.

Another reason for tuition free at college or university is that education is mandatory.
[It means that people must study, but many people prefer to work after finishing high school

instead of paying for being taught.] For that reason, to avoid younger people working, college

education must be tuition free.
Finally, by tuition free, many people have studied instead of work. [It has many

advantages, not only for student, but also for the country. It means that if more and more
people study, more and more benefits our country acquire of them.]

In sum, many people want to study and a tuition free is an excellent advantage for

them. Younger people who want to study after finishing high school opt for a college where
they don’t have to pay to achieve their goals.

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