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The most important thing for people is education. After finishing high school,
teenagers want to study at university. So, a college or university education should be
tuition free because many people don’t have money to pay for being taught.

There is a group of poor people who want to study at college. [These people are
the most important reason to demand tuition free at college, because poor people have the
same rights to study that others.] In addition, poor people are usually the best students
because of their dedication and desires to be a professional.

Another reason for tuition free at college or university is that education is
mandatory. [It means that people must study, but many people prefer to work after
finishing high school instead of paying for being taught.] For that reason, to avoid
younger people working, college education must be tuition free.

Finally, by tuition free, many people have studied instead of work. [It has many
advantages, not only for student, but also for the country. It means that if more and more
people study, more and more benefits our country acquire of them.]

In sum, many people want to study and a tuition free is an excellent advantage for
them. Younger people who want to study after finishing high school opt for a college
where they don’t have to pay to achieve their goals.

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Number of words: 228