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III. Going on a field trip allows me to strengthen the friendship ties and get to know other people
better.
a) Traveling with friends involves sharing experiences and situations that will allow me
to strengthen ties, and it give me the opportunity to know better to other people and
groups.
Step 4

Go hiking

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I like to go hiking for three reasons. Go hiking allows me to share new experiences with my family
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and friends. Experience extreme adventures and emotions with my friends. Explore and meet new
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places in my family's company. Go hiking allows me to get away from my routine. Enjoy going out
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and exploring a new environment. Going on a field trip allows me to strengthen the friendship ties
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and get to know other people better. Traveling with friends involves sharing experiences and
situations that will allow me to strengthen ties, and it give me the opportunity to know better to other
people and groups.
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Why I like to go hiking
I like to go hiking for three reasons. First, {Go hiking allows me to share new experiences with my
family and friends because it involves knowing new places ,new cultures, new customs and getting in
touch with different ways of seeing life.}Also, I experience extreme adventures and emotions with my
friends and my family. Second, {Go hiking allows me to get away from my daily routine}[For example:
Going hiking helps relieve stress of the daily routine, because we can enjoy go out and exploring a
new environment.] Finally, {going on a field trip allows me to strengthen the bonds of friendship and
get to know other people better.} This gives me the opportunity to get involved with other people and
share experiences and situations that will give me the possibility to know them better.

Words #: 152 words.
Sentences #: 7 sentences.

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