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                                                 Fantastic tour in New York

                  New  York  is  a  beautiful  and  very  large  place.  In  this  place  you  can  realize  exciting  and
                  educational activities, [such as going to the theater, museums, landmarks and shopping.] [New
                  York City is located in the state of New York, only thirty minutes to Newark Airport in New
                  Yersey.]  New  York  City  is  usually  packed  with  people  making  the  city  to  look  very
                  overcrowded. [Often, there are so many people on the sidewalks you have to walk in the street.
                  People walk to every direction.] Another interesting activity that New York City has to offer is
                  “The Big Apple Double-decker tour. First, the tour bus takes you to the lower part of New
                  York City. [When you will see the business area. An interesting part of that area is Wall Street,
                  where all the stocks are traded.] Next, you go on to midtown, [where they will stop at Central
                  Park.] Finally, you can go to eat an excellent and delicious typical food in this beautiful and
                  thrilling place.


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