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UNIVERSIDAD TECNICA DE AMBATO

                           PEDAGOGIA DE LOS IDIOMAS NACIONALES Y EXTRANJEROS

                                                       English writing I

                  Name: Nicole Heredia.
                  Course: 2  “B”.
                           nd
                  Date: October 21, 2017.

                  Introduction:

                  Write a one paragraph composition about something you have accomplishment.

                     1.  Topic sentence

                      The greatest achievements of my life

                     2.  Brainstorming
                           Learn how to ride a bike
                           Discover new things
                           Meet wonderful and loyal people.
                           Meet some goal                  Travel to another country
                                                                         My Graduation
                     3.  Organizing
                      I.     Topic sentence
                             The greatest achievements of my life have been five, and happened at different
                             stages of the same.
                      II.    General statements
                           Learning to ride a bike.
                           Discovering the main of effort, responsibility and constancy.
                           Beginning a new phase "the school" and the friends.
                           Fulfill my personal and professional goals.


                                               The greatest achievements of my life

                  The greatest achievements of my life have been five, and happened at different stages of the
                  same. First, when I was five years old, I fulfilled my first achievement. With the help of my
                  parents I learned to ride a bike, and although it was very difficult at first, I achieved after two
                  weeks of practice. Second, as I was growing up, I was discovering a lot of things, and I think
                  that was my second achievement. One day my mom asked me what I thought about my
                  future, and it made me reflect, understand and discover that the greatest achievements are
                  achieved with effort, responsibility and a lot of constancy. After that, I started to study, and I
                  found my third achievement there. At that moment I began to integrate with other girls of my
                  age, and I met my first friends, that was a great achievement for me because they have been



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