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Baños is a very touristic town because it has many parks and one of the most important park
is Montalvo’s park. Thus Montalvo’s park has many events and interesting things. First,
every weekend in Montalvo’s park there are many amazing events such as music concerts
and modern dancing. For example, [ the music concerts are different because in this city there
are many foreigners], too. They play piano or guitar. Furthermore, [the modern dancing is
amazing and fantastic because the people perform this professionally]. Also, this park has
many fantastic things such as statues of illustrious people and many funny games. [The Juan
Montalvo statue is located in this park because Juan Montalvo went to the park to read and
write]. Finally, it has many funny games where the people play soccer or basketball with
their family. In this park they can be funny and relaxing for their family.
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