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Demi Lovato is considered for the social group called lovatics as a role model for several

reasons. They admire her range of voice, her generosity and her experience leaving the drugs.

First, Demi Lovato had a big range of voice that is admired for her fans because her highest note

is E7. Also, a lot of singers such as Adele and Kelly Clarkson wanted to sing with her because of

her incredible voice. Second, Demi likes to help others. She gives to Africa a lot of money every

year. Demi Lovato also gives money for different centers of rehabilitation. Finally, people admire

her because of the message that she gives them when she leave the drugs. She was in rehabilitation

around two months in England. There she wrote songs for her lovatics. These songs help her to

stay strong. To conclude, Demi is a role model for the lovatics because of her talent, her

generosity, and her motivational message.

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Demi Lovato is considered for the social group called lovatics as a role model for several

reasons. They admire her vocal range, her generosity and her experience leaving the drugs. First,

Demi Lovato is a good singer with an incredible vocal range. [It is admired for her fans because

of her highest record that goes until the note E7. Also, a lot of singers such as Adele and Kelly

Clarkson want to sing with her because of her wonderful voice.] Second, Demi really likes to

help others. [She usually donates to Africa a lot of money every year. In addition, she helps a lot

of centers of Anorexia’s rehabilitation.] Finally, people admire her because of the message that

she gives being a drugs survivor. [Well, Demi Lovato was in rehabilitation around two months in

2012 in England. There she wrote songs for her and her lovatics. These songs help her to stay

strong.] To conclude, Demi Lovato is a role model for the lovatics because of her talent, her

generosity, and her motivational message.