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A. - The smoke of the cars causes the appearance of different bacteria that cause
damage.
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Tran’s first draft.
A SOLUTION FOR POLLUTION
People should be aware of the damage caused by pollution. First, if
people collaborate taking care of the environment, many diseases
would be avoided. Second, one of the main causes of pollution is
cars in poor condition, these cars that are in poor condition cause the
existence of bacteria that harm mainly children and adults. One of
the solutions would be to increase garbage dumps in all possible
spaces. In this way pollution will be reduced and beautiful and clean
cities will be achieved. Third, awareness must be given to the
damage caused by pollution to avoid damaging the health of people.
People talk about how warring is pollution but you must apply more
values and help take care if public spaces in this way will be able to
avoid different diseases.
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