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If you read this stanza aloud, emphasising the heavy beats
                                                              (marked with the downward strokes) the meter (Ballad) will be
                                                              obvious .
                                                                    —    /     —    /     —    /     —    /
                                                                 Though you   are just    a com-    mon bird
                                                                               —    /     —    /     —    /
                                                                              so soft -   ly grey   and white

                                                                    —    /     —    /     —    /     —    /
                                                                   I nev -     er tire  of watch -  ing your
                                                                               —    /     —    /     —    /
                                                                            mag - nif -  i - cence   in flight
                                                              Poets live with rhythm in their heads.  I have a signature poem
                                                              called “Surrender” about The Muse (Goddess thought to inspire
                                                              poets) It says —
                                                                     The muse has got me by the throat
                                                                     And made a slave of me,
                          by Jenny Jeays                             With constant rumbling in my head,
                                                                     A rhythm that won’t flee.
          A.T.C.L. in Art of Speech and Drama (Lon.)          Poets welcome this “rumbling”, but it can be overwhelming at
                                                              times.  If it’s not there, you can “invite” The Muse by —
         Chapter IV                                             • Reading lots of poetry ALOUD until you “get the rhythm and
                                                                 the rhythm gets you”.
                  More on Meter                                 • Clap and sound out a rhythm (ALOUD), such as Ballad Meter.

                                                                • Mulling about issues until your passion ignites them into poetry.
        BALLAD METER is a combination of alternating lines of 4 and 3   It may come straight away or at some other time.
        feet.  It is usually used for narrative (story telling).  It is acceptable in Ballad meter to have an extra light beat at the
        It is a 4 line stanza of Rising Rhythm (aloud) like this (“and” being   end of a line, but if it’s a RHYMING WORD you need to balance it
        the light stress) .                                   out as shown in this, the last stanza of my poem “Surrender”.

             —    /      —    /     —    /     —    /               —    /     —    /     —    /     —    /
           And 1      and 2      and 3      and 4 .                I’m glad  the muse    has capt -  tured me
             —    /      —    /     —    /     —    /               —    /     —    /     —    /     —    /
           What loss  is there   for those  who care                For in     her I    find pleas -  ure
                                                                    —    /     —    /     —    /     —    /
        FALLING RHYTM goes the opposite, from to light, (trochaic &
        dactylic sound this trochaic out (“and” being the light).   And I     en- joy    her con -   stanc -y
                                                                    —    /     —    /     —    /     —    /
             —    /      —    /     —    /     —    /                         her such
           And 1      and 2      and 3      and 4 .                so count              a treas -    ure .
              /   —       /   —      /   —      /   —

           Dip and    lift it    white star  liner - er

                                            Will Ogilvie                     a|b
        Ballad Meter is written in alternating lines of iambic tetrametres
        and iambic trimeters, rhyming at the end of the 2nd and 4th lines.
        A verse of ballad metre would sound out like this —

              —    /     —    /      —    /     —    /
              And 1      and 2       and 3      and 4
                         —    /      —    /     —    /            Part V: “Is It Poetry?”
                         And 1      And 2       and 3
              —    /     —    /      —    /     —    /            continues next month
              And 1      and 2       and 3      and 4
                         —    /      —    /     —    /
                       And 1         and 2      and 3
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