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Appendix 6  Sentence Problems






            Sentence Fragments
            Definition                                 Solution

            A sentence fragment is a group of          Add a subject.
            words that is not a complete sentence.     7   A fungus is not an animal. Is an organism belonging
            A fragment is usually missing either a        to a group called Fungi.
            subject or a verb, or it is a dependent
            clause. A dependent clause is never a      3   A fungus is not an animal. It is an organism
            complete sentence.                            belonging to a group called Fungi.

            To correct a sentence fragment:            Combine two clauses.
              •  add a subject or verb, or             7   Charles Darwin traveled to the Galapagos Islands.
                                                          Because he wanted to study the unique creatures.
              •  combine two clauses
                                                       3   Charles Darwin traveled to the Galapagos Islands
                                                          because he wanted to study the unique creatures.


            Run-on Sentences
            Definition                                 Solution

            A run-on sentence is two sentences         Separate into two sentences.
            incorrectly joined without a comma and     7    The three branches of the United States government are
            coordinating conjunction (and, but, or so).   the Executive, the Legislative, and the Judicial branches
            To correct a run-on sentence:                 the president is part of the Executive branch.
              •   add a comma and a connecting word, or  3   The three branches of the United States government are
              •   add a period to separate the sentence   the Executive, the Legislative, and the Judicial branches.
                into two sentences                        The president is part of the Executive branch.

            Comma Splices

            Definition                                 Solution
            A comma splice occurs when two or more     Add a connecting word.
            sentences or independent clauses are       7   Michelangelo created his statue David in 1504, it is
            connected with a comma.                       considered a masterpiece of Renaissance sculpture.
            To correct a comma splice:                 3   Michelangelo created his statue David in 1504, and it
              •   add a connecting word after the         is considered a masterpiece of Renaissance sculpture.
                comma,                                 Create two sentences.
              •   create two sentences from the one, or
                                                       3   Michelangelo created his statue David in 1504. It is
              •   combine the most important words        considered a masterpiece of Renaissance sculpture.
                into one sentence and add a
                subordinating conjunction (because,    Add a subordinating conjunction.
                since, although)                       7   Astronauts usually stay on the International Space
                                                          Station for only four to six months, being in zero
                                                          gravity is hard on the human body.
                                                       3  Because being in zero gravity is hard on the human
                                                          body, astronauts usually stay on the International
                                                          Space Station for only four to six months.


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