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Common Error 4.3  Does the clause need a future or present verb?

                                                                  become
            Most immigrants will adapt to a new culture after they will become familiar with the customs.
                          are
            If the results will be unsatisfactory, they will need to redesign the experiment.

            RemembeR:  •  Use the future in the independent clause and simple present in the dependent
                            clause (the time clause).
                         •   For real conditional sentences, use the simple present in the dependent clause
                           (the if clause) and the future in the independent clause.




             ACTIVITY 5      Common Error 4.3
           Read the following paragraphs. Find the complex sentences. Underline the six verb
           errors in the main and dependent clauses. Then write the correction above each error.


                                      effective Study Techniques

               1  Researchers at a local university are planning a study to identify effective study

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            techniques.  One technique they will explore is self-testing.  Results from previous
            studies show that if students will test themselves before taking an exam, they will do
            better on the exam.

               4  Researchers believe that successful learners use other strategies, and the study
            will identify those strategies.  Before the researchers choose the participants, the
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            volunteers will complete a survey about their study habits.  The researchers will then
            select volunteers for the study.  The experiment will begin as soon as there will be 50
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            volunteers.  When the students will work in their assigned groups, they will keep logs of
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            their study habits, test scores, and end-of-term grades.

               9  After researchers collect and analyze the data, they will make specific
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            recommendations.  If the study results are significant, the university will provide
            strategy training for its professors.  Researchers believe students become better learners
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            if teachers will use these strategies in their classrooms.  If researchers are able to identify
            additional strategies that successful students use, they will also implement workshops for

            students.  However, researchers will not recommend any curriculum changes unless the
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            results of the study will be significant.







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