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                  REVISE AND EDIT                                                            Review your draft.

               The revision and editing steps give you a chance to look carefully at your

               writing and make changes. Work with a partner to determine whether you

               have explained your ideas clearly to readers. Use these questions to help
               you evaluate and improve your science article.




                      PURPOSE/            ORGANIZATION            EVIDENCE              LANGUAGE/            CONVENTIONS
                        FOCUS                                                          VOCABULARY

                 … … Do I state my      … … Do I explain      … … Do I need to add   … … Did I define     … … Are all words
                    topic clearly?        supporting             more evidence to      science words         spelled correctly?
                                          details in a way       explain any of        that readers may
                 … … Do I explain one     that makes             the details?          not know?          … … Does each
                    way an animal is      sense?                                                             sentence have a
                    able to survive?                                                                         subject and a
                                        … … Did I include an                                                 verb?
                                          ending sentence
                                          that wraps up the                                               … … Did I use
                                          article?                                                           adjectives to
                                                                                                             describe or
                                                                                                             compare?





                  PUBLISH                                                                     Share your work.


               Create a Finished Copy  Make a final copy of your article. You may want
               to include a photo or drawing to support your topic. Consider these

               options to share your article:

                   1  Combine your article with those of your classmates to make your

                       own science magazine.

                   2  Work with a small group to plan a presentation for the class. Read

                       aloud your articles and ask for comments and questions.

                   3  Record your article for a podcast on animal survival.

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