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REVISE AND EDIT Review your draft.

The revision and editing steps give you a chance to look carefully at your writing

and make changes. Work with a partner to determine whether you have explained
your ideas clearly to readers. Use these questions to help you evaluate and improve
your article.

PURPOSE/ ORGANIZATION EVIDENCE LANGUAGE/ CONVENTIONS
FOCUS VOCABULARY

Does my sequel Does the Have I used what Have I included Do all sentences
idea make sense? introduction I learned about transition words have subject-
describe the weather that connect verb agreement?
Does my sequel’s setting and the references to ideas?
problem connect characters? convey a Do pronouns
logically to the message about match the nouns
original story? Have I provided a the characters or they modify?
logical plot?
resolution? Have I used
commas correctly
with
prepositional
phrases?

PUBLISH Share your work.

Create a Finished Copy Make a final copy of your sequel. You may wish to include an
illustration. Consider these options to share your sequel.

1 Record a Story Sequel Podcast. Record yourself and your classmates reading

their sequels aloud; then play it for other classes.

2 Publish the sequels in a class online newsletter.

3 Start a blog in which you read and comment on other sequels.

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