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REVISE AND EDIT Review your draft.

The revision and editing steps give you a chance to look carefully at your writing

and make changes. Work with a partner to determine whether you have successfully
supported your main ideas with evidence from the texts and videos. Use these
questions to help you evaluate and improve your speech.

PURPOSE/ ORGANIZATION EVIDENCE LANGUAGE/ CONVENTIONS
FOCUS VOCABULARY

Does my speech Will my Do I use at least Did I use Did I use correct
explain how introduction grab two stories from transition words spelling?
people can my audience’s the texts and to create a
achieve their attention? videos as smooth flow Have I used
goals? examples of how of ideas? commas
Does my to achieve correctly?
Does my speech conclusion success? Did I use
stay on topic? inspire my language Did I use correct
listeners to set Do the examples appropriate for capitalization?
and achieve their I’ve chosen my topic and
own goals? help support my audience?
main idea?

PUBLISH Share your work.

Create a Finished Copy Make a final copy of your speech. You may wish to include
photographs of the people you discuss in your speech. Consider these options to
share your speech.

1 Deliver your speech to your class or a younger class.

2 Record your speech on a school website and ask viewers for feedback.

3 Publish your speech in a school newsletter.

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