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                  REVISE AND EDIT                                                             Review your draft.

               Revise and edit your draft by carefully reviewing it and making changes to improve it.

               Work with a partner or small group. Read each other’s articles and ask questions or
               offer feedback. Use these questions to help you focus on ways to improve your article.



                      PURPOSE/            ORGANIZATION            EVIDENCE              LANGUAGE/            CONVENTIONS
                        FOCUS                                                          VOCABULARY
                 … …Does my            … …Is the article      … …Have I included    … …Did I use precise   … …Have I spelled all
                    introduction          organized into         facts and             language and          words correctly?
                    state the topic       paragraphs that        examples from         topic-specific
                    and connect it to     each focus on an       the text to           vocabulary?        … …Did I correctly
                    a scientific          important idea?        support each                                use quotation
                    discovery?                                   main point?        … …Did I clearly         marks, italics, and
                                       … …Do headings                                  define technical      underlining?
                 … …Does my               show the focus of   … …Do I need to add      terms?
                    conclusion show       each paragraph?        more evidence to
                    the importance                               strengthen my
                    of the discovery?                            support?





                  PUBLISH                                                                     Share your work.


               Create a Finished Copy.  Make a final copy of your article. Include illustrations or
               graphic aids such as maps, charts, or diagrams. Consider these options for sharing

               your article:
                    1  Combine your article with those of your classmates to create a textbook on

                       scientific discovery. Decide together on a title for the book.

                   2  Give an illustrated lecture to classmates or a science club. Read your article and
                       display supporting visuals, such as diagrams and photographs. Invite the

                       audience to comment and ask questions.

                   3  Post your article online to a school or science club website.





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