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Writing Part 2
When you give recommendations
A report in your report make sure that you
include reasons for them.
Read the Writing Part 2 exam question and the model answer.

Your English teacher has asked you to write a report on the parks in your town. Write about
where the parks are, what people do in them and suggest ways in which they could be improved.
Write your report in 140–190 words in an appropriate style.

Suggestions for improvements
Introduction
Victoria Park has only one tree, and no
The aim of this report is to list the parks grass at all. I would suggest planting more
in my town, to say what people do in trees and adding an area of grass for
them and to suggest ways in which they people to sit on. Riverland Park has very
could be improved.
old park benches, which are all broken. I

suggest ixing or replacing them.
Victoria Park
This is in the city centre between the Conclusion
shops and the station. It is quite small
and is mainly used as a quick way to get To sum up, the two parks in the city attract

from the station to the shops. people for diferent reasons. Victoria Park
needs to become a greener area, and
Riverland Park needs to have some repairs
Riverland Park carried out on the equipment.
This is a large park on the edge of town,
with open grassy spaces and lots of
trees. People come here to get some PDF from sachtienganhhanoi.com
exercise or have a picnic with their
families at the weekend.

1 Tick (✓) the sentences if the student has followed the suggestion in
the report.
1 The report should have a title.
2 Each part of the report should have a clear heading.
3 The report should have an introduction and conclusion.
4 The introduction should not repeat the words in the question.
5 The report should not be written in an informal style.
6 The report should be between 140 and 190 words.
2 Choose the correct option in italics.

1 The purpose of this report is finding / to find out how many people
are using the parks.
2 I would recommend opening / to open a kiosk near the picnic area.
3 I would also suggest repairing / to repair the old fountain in the
centre of the park.
4 The best solution is closing / to close the park gates at night to
prevent vandalism.
5 Another option would be attracting / to attract more people to the
park by holding events.
6 My proposal involves building / to build a skatepark next to the
basketball court.

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