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DESCRIBING AN EVENT


                                              Nine Deaths


                                              By: Kamakxi Upadhaya


     I was 13 years old when my mom and I went on a trip to visit some family in my hometown in Kathmandu. When
     we  arrived  at  the  house  we  were  staying  in,  I  looked  around  curiously.  I  felt  an  eerie  vibe  wash  over  me  but
     concluded it was nothing and went to shower and freshen up. I'm still not entirely sure how it happened, but as I
     entered the bathroom, I suddenly slipped and hit my rear end pretty hard on the floor.


     My mom was pounding on the locked door to let her in while I lay there on the bathroom floor, crying incessantly.
     After I calmed down, I finally let my worried mother in. I remember her examining the floor with a confused look
     on her face because the floor was in fact bone-dry. I had slipped before I even stepped into the shower. And that was
     just the beginning.


     Later that evening my mom needed to run some errands so she left me alone in the house. I began to write in my
     diary about the trip so far and that's when I heard something grumble. It was my stomach, so I hopped out of bed to
     grab some snacks from the kitchen. I opened the bedroom door and as I took a step forward, the door slammed back
     shut hitting my head hard. I fell backwards and onto the carpet, screaming as I saw blood dripping near my eyes. I

     swear I felt the red, hot blood dripping down my forehead. It hurt so bad, my vision started blurring and I passed
     out. Just before I did, I remember hearing a woman’s laugh. A maniacal cackle.


     I woke up and felt a terrible pain in my forehead. I touched the sore area, but it wasn't wet. There was no blood, no
     swelling but only pain. The door was still cracked halfway open and I was still home alone. I ended up thinking I
     was just hallucinating until it started becoming more than just a coincidence.  These instances kept happening to me.
     I would get inexplicably hurt but ultimately end up fine. One day a knife would fly at me and another time I would
     begin choking out of nowhere. Every time something like this happened I heard that same eerie laugh.


     The day before my 14th birthday, I finally decided to tell my mom. I had counted eight times that I had nearly died
     and I didn't want it to happen anymore. While I was explaining every incident to her I could see the blood drain
     from  her  face.  She  grabbed  my  hand  and  pulled  me  outside  -  her  free  hand  making  calls  on  her  cell  phone.  I
     remember feeling really scared, ‘Did I do something wrong?’ ‘Was she going to put me in a mental asylum?’ A
     short ride later, my thoughts were answered.



     Thankfully we arrived at a church and not a mental asylum.  They ushered me inside and my grandma proceeded to
     tell me what was going on: My Aunt Nevina was a teen mom around the time my parents got married. She lived
     alone at the time, so no one knew about the baby. Unfortunately, she hated her baby girl, Kamala. She blamed her
     for taking her life away to misery. She hated her so much that she tried to kill her multiple times: purposely making
     her slip in the bathroom, slamming her head by the door, pushing her at a bus stop, throwing a knife at her, cutting
     her fingers, strangling her, poisoning her, and throwing her out the balcony of the fifth floor. Kamala died on the
     ninth try. She died around the same time that I was born. The only reason my family knew any of this is because
     Aunt Nevina had visited me for the first time when I was around 3. After hearing my name Kamakxi, she confessed
     everything and all her crimes. My family had her committed to an institution after that. I was in shock after the story
     ended. Soon, the priest at the church blessed me in hopes of removing the curse that Aunt Nevina had put on me.


     As  of  now,  the  blessing  seems  to  have  worked.  So  far  it's  been  a  year  and  I  haven't  had  any  more  near-death
     experiences. I'm just glad that I told my parents about what was going on when I did. Because if I had waited any
     longer, who knows, things might have ended differently.
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