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c. Discuss with your partner the following resume parts. Find out which one is more effective and

state the reasons.

1. Excerpt 1: Summary

Enthusiastic and friendly registered nurse with 6+ years’ experience of providing high
quality care to a variety of patients. Feels comfortable working in 20+ bed units and in
A
dynamic environments such as ER or ICU. Looking to leverage wide range of nursing
skills and knowledge as a registered nurse at East Orange General Hospital.

I’ve just finished nursing school and I’d like to use my enthusiasm and hard work to care
for elderly patients. B

2. Excerpt 2: Summary

Experienced registered nurse committed to high quality care looking to effectively fill

nursing position at EOGH. A

Friendly, compassionate, and positive new RN grad with 80 hours of clinical experience

and 15 hours in critical care as a nursing student. Looking to leverage knowledge and
passion for elderly patient care as a registered nurse at Roosevelt Care Center. B

3. Excerpt 3: Work experience

Registered Nurse
July 2017-June 2019
Crossover Health, Boise, ID
• Cared for patients and their comfort. A
• Maintained high patient care standards.

• Responsible for newly hired nurses.

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