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The Lyrics Doctor








        done what you might call a lighter version of         comments on
        co-writing, in which a friend and I come up           board).
        with a few words or a line and challenge each         However you
        other to include it in a song. In one instance a      do it, I
        couple of years ago, shortly after one of             strongly
        Donald Trump’s underlings had coined the              recommend
        phrase “Alternative Facts,” I suggested we try        giving
        that. A couple of weeks later I came up with a        co-writing a
        lament about failed love that had nothing to do  try.
        with the U.S. president. My co-writer then
        suggested we try writing something that begins
        with the words “She drinks.” It didn’t take me
        long to come up with the opening line, “She           Happy SongwR iting
                                                                              x
        drinks to remember / He drinks to forget,”
        from which I
        was able to put                                       The Lyrics Doctor
        together a song
        of betrayal and                                       The Lyrics Doctor is the songwriter, singer, and
        heartbreak--a                                         guitarist for:
        deeply                                                The Gincident
        personal song                                         and
        that was                                              Her Dog Henry.
        entirely my
        own, but which                                        If you have any lyrics-related questions for the
        had been                                              doctor, please send them to
        sparked by the                                        jane@writeawaymagazine.co.uk
        challenge from
        my friend (whose own composition could
        hardly have been more different).


        Even if you write personal songs, it’s never
        a bad idea to have input from others, either
        through the entire process or just to spawn ide-
        as. If you don’t know other musicians, try going
        to a local open mic or joining a songwriting

        group online. It’s easy to find willing
        collaborators. And you can always find
        someone to simply listen and give suggestions
        (I often play my songs for band members and
        others and ask them to critique them, and
        they almost always get better after I take their


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