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arab in the exact time following the rhythm of the song .Skating makes my

mind and body work together. This gives me self-confidence, which helps

me do better at work, in society, in my personal life, and with my family.

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Why I love figure Skating classes

I enjoy taking figure skating classes for three reasons. First, figure skating

classes are great places to make friends because people who skating usually

have healthy lifestyles and positive attitudes. I met my best friend Shirley

in a figure skating class and my boyfriend Ismael in a hockey class.

"Second, skating classes introduce me to the music , and it helps me feel

the rhythm of the music and interpret it. For example, make a turn in two

feet, or an arab in the exact time following the rhythm of the song "Finally

skating makes my mind and body work together. This gives me self-

confidence, which helps me do better at work, in society, in my personal

life, and with my family.