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Name: Mishel Yazán

                         Feedback  is  the  information  or  criticism  a  student  receives  once  they  have

                  completed a job to improve their weaknesses (Can & Walker, 2010). However, I think

                  that feedback is necessary because it helps students learn from their own mistakes,  it
                  increases the desire to continue learning and it increases student confidence.


                  First of all, feedback on academic writing helps students learn from their own mistakes.
                  Due to feedback, students look at their mistakes and analyze them. In this way  they

                  pretend not to make the same mistake again. According to the University of Reading,

                  feedback improves learning and student’s retention.

                         Another reason why feedback on academic writing is important is that the student

                  increases  the  desire  to  continue  learning.  According  to  Race  wrote  that  feedback  is
                  connected to an important capability if competence. The student is aware that if he makes

                  mistakes his grades will be lower. Afterwards, they try to learn by themselves and then

                  they will have better grades than before.

                         Finally, it increases the confidence of the student, in themselves. The student, after

                  learning from his mistakes, knows that he will not make the same mistake and therefore
                  feels more confident thanks to the feedback. Students known that receiving feedback is

                  important to improve their writing on academic writing and it provides self-confidence to

                  each student. (Caffarella, 2010)

                         In conclusion, feedback on academic writing is very important and necessary for

                  students to learn. Feedback is an advantage for students because they can learn from their
                  own  mistakes,  it  increases  the  desire  to  continue  learning  and  it  increases  student

                  confidence.
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