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point 1             point 2               point 3
                    improving my study habits, organizing my time, and cutting back

                    my

                    work hours.




                                                   point 1                         thesis

                    link
                    Topic sentence 1: Better study habits have been a key to my

                    improved grades.






                                          point 2                 thesis link


                    Topic sentence 2: Planning has also helped me improve my
                    grades.






                                                          thesis link


                    Topic sentence 3: The step that has most affected my GPA was

                                   point 3
                    reducing my work hours.




               Exercise 5-2 Providing Thesis Links




               Following are five thesis statements and topic sentences that relate to

               them. Circle the letter of the topic sentence that does not have a

               thesis link, that is, the sentence that does not mention the general
               subject of the essay. Then rewrite the sentence, linking it to the thesis.
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