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television news stories about trusted scout leaders, teachers, or
pastors being arrested for child molestation or child pornography, I
am reminded that I can take nothing for granted. Fortunately, the
business of daily living usually keeps those thoughts away,
otherwise, I don’t know how I would stay sane.
No major changes.
Raising a child is a joy even though it is a full-time job, and it
is even harder when money is scarce and the world seems uncertain.
Still, I would not trade the joys of raising my daughter for all the
wealth and security in the world.
Conclusion is okay.
Carla’s final draft