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television news stories about trusted scout leaders, teachers, or

               pastors being arrested for child molestation or child pornography, I
               am reminded that I can take nothing for granted. Fortunately, the

               business of daily living usually keeps those thoughts away,

               otherwise, I don’t know how I would stay sane.




                   No major changes.



                Raising a child is a joy even though it is a full-time job, and it
               is even harder when money is scarce and the world seems uncertain.

               Still, I would not trade the joys of raising my daughter for all the

               wealth and security in the world.




                   Conclusion is okay.




               Carla’s final draft
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