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prepositional phrases can also be stretched with modifiers and
                    compound objects: beside Katie’s bright blue dance shoes and

                    pink-and-purple designer leotard. More often, though, the three-

                    word pattern prevails.




               Practice 12-5  Eliminating Prepositional



               Phrases



               Cross out the prepositional phrases in the following sentences.




                        1. The vivid colors of the flowers in the blue bowl on the table

                        brighten the room.

                        2. Outside the office, on the busy street, swarms of happy

                        vacationers were leaving for weekend trips.
                        3. The point of Mr. Smith’s remarks to the class was lost on

                        Kendall, who dozed peacefully in the back row.

                        4. For dessert, I’ll have a cup of coffee and a slice of that

                        gooey, rich pecan pie.

                        5. The smell of freshly brewed coffee and frying bacon wafted

                        through the open door of the small restaurant on the corner of
                        Poplar and Main.


                             Real-World Writing: Is It Okay to




                             End a Sentence




                             with a Preposition?
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