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Mary applied for a scholarship, but they said she didn’t meet the
                    requirements.




               To correct the problem, replace the pronoun with a more specific

               word.




                       When I went to the bank to cash my check, the teller asked for
                    two forms of identification.




                       Mary applied for a scholarship, but the committee said she didn’t

                    meet the requirements.




               Practice 18-3 Correcting Problems in



               Pronoun Reference



               Correct the pronoun reference problems in each of the following

               sentences.




                    1.  Carrie tried to avoid taking college algebra, but they said she

                        had to have it.


                    2.  We had looked forward to the concert, but they were so loud

                        we could not enjoy the music.



                    3.  When Tomás went to the FotoMart to pick up his vacation
                        photographs, they gave him pictures of a baby’s christening by

                        mistake.
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