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Fragments

In the following paragraph, correct the fragments, run-ons, and

comma splices.

5 fragments

2 run-ons

3 comma splices

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Last spring, when I decided to plant a vegetable garden. I
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discovered that gardening has its unpleasant aspects. Two hours in
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the garden convinced me of one fact gardening is a dirty job. Even
though I wore gardening gloves, dirt found its way under my

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fingernails, my shoes and jeans were caked with mud. After half an
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hour of gardening. I discovered a second unpleasant aspect of
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gardening—heat. The sun beat down on me as I worked. Causing beads
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of sweat to pop out on my forehead and run into my eyes. Sweat stung
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my eyes and soaked my T-shirt I was extremely uncomfortable. The
dirt and the heat were bad enough, pesky bugs and slimy worms were

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even worse. The sweat attracted flies, they hovered and buzzed
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around my head. When I turned over the soil with my trowel, I

unearthed slimy worms and grubs that squirmed palely in the sunlight.
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Then burrowed back into the dark earth. A ripe tomato from the
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garden may taste better than one from the grocery store. But is not
worth the trouble it takes to grow it.