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3.  Perry told the officer, “I was going under 50 miles per hour.”
                        Modifier to insert: just



                        Intended meaning: He was going 49.5 miles per hour.


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                    4.  The officer replied, “Sir, you were going 65.”

                        Modifier to insert: almost


                        Intended meaning: He was going 64.5 miles per hour.


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                    5.  I gave Mary twenty dollars.

                        Modifier to insert: almost


                        Intended meaning: I thought about it but did not give it to her.


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