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Active Voice and Passive Voice











                             2        Identify and use active and passive voice

                                      or correct unnecessary shifts in voice.









               Look at this sentence:




                      At the clothing store, Eric tried on several jackets, but none were

                    purchased.




               It contains an unnecessary shift from active voice to passive voice.
               Here is the corrected version:




                       At the clothing store, Eric tried on several jackets, but he

                    purchased none.




               Active voice means that the subject of a verb performs the action
               described by the verb, as in the following sentence:




                       Tom ate the hamburger.
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