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active
                       The entire nation mourned when President John F. Kennedy


                        passive
                    was assassinated.




               The shift is necessary because to stay in active voice the writer of the

               sentence would have to take the focus away from Kennedy by writing
               a sentence like this one: “The entire nation mourned when Lee Harvey

               Oswald assassinated President John F. Kennedy.”






               Writing Sentences in Active Voice




               and Passive Voice






               To avoid unnecessary shifts between active voice and passive voice,
               you need to be able to recognize and write sentences in both voices.

               The next section of the chapter gives you practice in switching from

               passive to active voice and from active to passive voice.




               Switching from Passive Voice to Active



               Voice




               To switch from passive voice to active voice, first determine who or
               what acts upon the subject of the sentence. Then rewrite the sentence

               to make that actor the subject.
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