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A bee is crawling on Angela’s shirt.




               Practice 22-3  Revising Sentences That


               Begin with There is




               Revise the following sentences to eliminate There is, There are, There

               was, or There were.



                    1.  There are flowers in window boxes at the front of the house.



                    2.  In the morning, there was snow on the ground.



                    3.  There is a lone goldfish in a bowl on a table by the wall.


                    4.  There were fudgy fingerprints on the front of the white

                        refrigerator.



                    5.  There was a wreath of fall leaves on the front door.








               Sentences Beginning with It is






               Sentences that begin with It is are, too often, stiff, passive-voice
               nightmares. In some cases, fixing a sentence that begins with It is

               requires only chopping off the beginning of the sentence. In other
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