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cases, you may need to rewrite the entire sentence. Don’t be afraid to
scrap a bad sentence and substitute a good one.
It is a fact that many people are depressed during the holidays.
This sentence is easily fixed by removing the words “it is a fact that.”
Many people are depressed during the holidays.
It is regrettable that John has chosen to leave the company.
The solution to this sentence is a complete rewrite:
John’s decision to leave the company is regrettable.
Everyone is sorry to see John leave the company.
Practice 22-4 Revising Sentences That
Begin with It is
Revise the following sentences to eliminate It is constructions.
1. It is clear that I need better study habits.
2. It is understandable that you do not wish to incur any additional
expense.
