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STEP 4: Make an outline
Nowadays, most people migrate in order to escape from poverty, to get a better education,
and to escape from social problems
I. One cause of migration is to escape poverty
A. Corruption
B. Many countries have not enough resources to provide people jobs.
C. The income that people earn is not enough
II. Another cause is to have a better education
A. Education is not good
B. Education cost a lot of money
C. Having a mastered is important for people
III. The last migration cause is to escape from social problems.
A. Too much violence
B. Suffer of discrimination
C. Many people want to feel free, and get the same rights.
STEP 5: FINAL ESSAY
Migration is the movement of people from one region to another and often back again. It
has been part of globalization for many years. Migration can affect people in many ways.
Nowadays, most people migrate in order to escape from poverty, to get a better education,
and to escape from social problems
One cause of migration is to escape poverty. Poverty has been a problem that maybe it
doesn’t have solution. Most countries are poor because of corruption. The governments do
not care about what poor people need, it steals their money and take advantage of poor
people. Needy people must support their family, thus they opt to get better job opportunities
in another country.
Another cause is to have a better education. Most countries do not provide people a good
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