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STEP 4: Make an outline

                  Nowadays, most people migrate in order to escape from poverty, to get a better education,
                  and to escape from social problems

                      I.     One cause of migration is to escape poverty
                             A.  Corruption

                             B.  Many countries have not enough resources to provide people jobs.

                             C.  The income that people earn is not enough


                      II.    Another cause is to have a better education
                             A.  Education is not good

                             B.  Education cost a lot of money
                             C.  Having a mastered is important for people



                      III.   The last migration cause is to escape from social problems.
                            A.  Too much violence

                            B.  Suffer of discrimination
                            C.  Many people want to feel free, and get the same rights.






                  STEP 5: FINAL ESSAY

                     Migration is the movement of people from one region to another and often back again. It

                  has been part of globalization for many years. Migration can affect people in many ways.
                  Nowadays, most people migrate in order to escape from poverty, to get a better education,

                  and to escape from social problems

                     One cause of migration is to escape poverty. Poverty has been a problem that maybe it
                  doesn’t have solution. Most countries are poor because of corruption. The governments do

                  not  care  about  what  poor  people  need,  it  steals  their  money  and  take  advantage  of  poor

                  people. Needy people must support their family, thus they opt to get better job opportunities
                  in another country.

                     Another cause is to have a better education. Most countries do not provide people a good
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