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education, also many people do not have the opportunity to study. People decided to take the

risk and go to another country in which they can either continue studying or get a better

education. Moreover, some people migrate because their countries do not have the programs
that they want to study. Also, having a mastered is important for people, so they go to

another country to have it.
The last migration cause is to escape from social problems. In some countries there is too

much violence, people do not feel save in their hometowns. Therefore, they want to change

and improve their lifestyle. Migration is the best option for people who want to feel
protected. Moreover, people around the world suffer of discrimination. It affects people in

many ways, so they leave their countries in order to be accepted.
As a conclusion, migration may influence people in negative and positive aspects. Many

countries may improve the economy, education, and give people security. In this way,
people don not opt to go to another country to get a good lifestyle. For people the most

important things are having security, the opportunity to study, and a better economic

situation.

Hook: Definition
Thesis Statement
Supporting ideas
Conclusion: Opinion

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