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STEP 4: Make an outline
Globalization in Ecuador has most positives aspects than negatives, such as development of
science and technological growth, and strengthening of relationship between countries
I. Globalization develops two important fields.
A. Science
1. Substances to improve agricultural products.
2. Medicine.
B. Technology
1. Electro domestics.
2. Office machines.
3. Commutation tools.
II. Strengthening of relationship between other countries
A. Economical
1. Get loans
2. Build schools, houses, and hospitals.
3. Have a better lifestyle.
B. Cultural changes.
1. Traditions.
2. Festivities.

STEP 5. Write the essay.
Globalization causes a big impact in developing countries and it gives a lots benefits
to developed countries. Some people say that globalization has more disadvantages than
advantages. I think that globalization in Ecuador has most positives aspects than negatives,
such as development of science and technological growth, and strengthening of relationship
between countries.
Initially, globalization develops two important fields. Such as science and
technology. Scientists works on improve substances to improve the growth and production
of agricultural products. For example, nowadays farmers use more insecticides, fungicides
and others chemicals to get growth plants faster. On the other hand, it could improve their
incomes but it is also harm for humans’ healthy. However, the development of technology
makes people life easier. As a consequence, having electro domestics at home have become
a basic necessity. The same way, having office machines and communication tools.
Second, globalization strengthens relationship between other countries. Hence, it
could help to make some economical agreement among other presidents and organizations.
So that, it could be easier get loans to build schools, hospitals, and houses for people that
do not have a place to live. It would reduce the number of homeless people. Also, Ecuador
have had cultural changes. Some traditions are different, for example the October 31. Most
people celebrate hollowing instead of shield national day.
To sum up, globalization gives tools to make people life better according to the
positives aspects. Nowadays, technology and science advances together with relationship
with other countries are indispensable to the Ecuador development process.

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