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UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICDA DE AMBATO
CARRERA DE IDIOMAS
NAME: Anita García LEVEL: 4
DATE: 6, Oct,2017 WRITING II
Write a three level paragraph about a social group or culture.
Step 1. Brainstorming
Music band: Seventeen is a role model for the social group Carat.
 Perseverance
They did not give up
Fought against the difficulties
Keep on trying to debut

 Passion
They love what they are doing
They give all in each performance they have
Always trying to improve

 Kindness
What they earn=donated to foundations
Sometimes they give away tickets
They help each other

Step 2. Draft a topic sentence
The music band Seventeen has been chosen by the social group Carat to be their role
model because of three main qualities: perseverance, passion, and kindness.

Step 3. Making an outline
The music band Seventeen has been chosen by the social group Carat to be their role

model because of three main qualities: perseverance, passion, and kindness.
I. They are very perseverant people

1. They didn’t give up in any circumstance
2. They fought against adversities

II. They always show how passionate they are

1. In each performance they give their all
2. Always trying to improve

III. They are considered as kind people

1. What they earn in their concerts are donated
2. They help each other

Step 4. First Draft
The music band Seventeen has been chosen by the social group Carat to be their role

model because of three main qualities: perseverance, passion and kindness. First, they
are very perseverant people. They did not give up in any circumstances in the past.

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