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They fought against all the adversities they found. They always show how passionate

they are. In each performance, they give all what they have. Also they are trying to
improve everything. Another thing is that they are seen as kind people. What the band

earns in each concert, a percentage is donated to foundations. They also show support
within them. In short, “carat” sees the band Seventeen as a role model because they are

perseverant, passionate and kind people.
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The k-pop band “Seventeen” has been chosen by the social group denominated

“Carat” as their role model, because of three main qualities such as perseverance,
passion and kindness. First, they showed how perseverant they were after their debut.

[They did not give up in any circumstance.] While they were preparing before their
debut, many people said they were not good, but they kept on trying. [They also fought

against adversities.] People wanted them to separate but they did not do it. Second, they
always show how passionate they are. [For instance, in each performance they have,

they always give their best] In addition, they are always trying to improve, so that they

can show better stages of themselves. Finally, they are see by “carat” as kind people.
[For example, a percentage of earnings is donated to foundation.] They have helped

kids, elders and more with that. [Also, they help each other.] When someone has a

problem, the boys are always giving support and helping. In short, the social group
“carat” has chosen the band “Seventeen” as a role model because they are perseverant,

passionate and kind people.

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