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CORRECTION
Name: Roy Gómez
Date: 20/10/2017
Instruction:
Write a three level paragraph about a kind of a role model chosen by a social group or
culture (150 words).
6. Brainstorming
Redimi2 as a teacher
- He teaches adults
- He teaches teenagers
- He teaches people with his own songs.
Redimi2 as a role in the family
- He takes care of his daughter
- He is good husband
- He helps his family to grow as people
Redimi2 as a famous person.
- He is a great influence to teenagers
- He make everything in God`s will
- He is a creative singer.
2) Draft a topic sentence.
The Puerto Rican singer Redimi2 called Willy is a great role model for teenagers and social
groups for his behavior, as a father his capacity to tech people and is optimistic attitude.
3) Make an outline
Redimi2 a great influence on teenagers and adults
I. Redimi2 role model in the family
a. As a father
b. As a husband
c. As a friend
II. Redimi2 and his capacity to teaches
a. Strategies to attract the attention
b. He teaches through his songs
c. He use social networks.
III. Optimistic Attitude
a. He has recorded 12 Cds.
b. He gives 4 concerts per week
c. Each year he records a new album.
