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4) First Draft

Redimi2 a great role model to follow

The Puerto Rican singer Redimi2 is one of the most influent singer on people's life for his
qualities which are: his behavior, his capacity to teach and his optimistic attitude. Redimi2 is a
role model for families. He has a daughter called Samantha Gonzales and his wife is Daliza
Contreras. As a father of that family, he is always deciding for them. Although, Willy has to
travel almost each week to give concerts, he has taken care of his family. Redimi2 is so
responsible with his relatives. Another good quality of Redimi2 is his capacity to teach people
of any age. He uses a lot the social networks such as: Facebook, Instagram, twitter and
YouTube. Through those technologic resources, he can share his motivational songs or
messages. It has inspired to many woman who do not know how beautiful they are. Willy's
attitude has been always optimistic for instance, when he was a child his parents died, although
that happened in his life he decided to change his attitude. Even though how many years old he
has, he wants to follow doing what he likes that is to sing.

5) Final Draft
Redimi2 a great role model to follow

The Puerto Rican singer Redimi2 called Willy Gonzales is one of the most influent
Cristian singer on people's life for his qualities which are: his behavior, his capacity to
teach and his optimistic attitude. First, Redimi2 is a role model for families. He has a
daughter called Samantha Gonzales and his wife is Daliza Contreras. As a father of that
family, he is always deciding for them. Although, Willy has to travel almost each week
to give concerts, he has taken care of his family. Redimi2 is so responsible with his
relatives. Another good quality of Redimi2 is his capacity to teach people of any age.
He uses a lot the social networks such as: Facebook, Instagram, twitter and YouTube.
Through those technologic resources, he can share his motivational songs or messages.
For example, his song called "Bonita" It has inspired to many woman who do not know
how beautiful they are. Finally, Willy's attitude has been always optimistic for instance,
when he was a child his parents died, although that happened in his life he decided to
change his attitude. Even though, how many years old he has, he wants to follow doing
what he likes that is to sing.

Evidence for Objective 2